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Kenzo Sprite
by Trainer Lucas Sat Dec 31, 2011 11:55 am
Yup, I made it last night. Stayed up till 2:30 making it. *Yawn* How is it?
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Re: Kenzo Sprite
by TehKrazeh1 Sat Dec 31, 2011 12:56 pm
The eye is really bad. It has a bad color choice, and is way off.
The entire shape is also way off.
The arms aren't going into the pockets. Well they are, but you have to enlarge the pockets.
Legs are too straight.
Feet are oddly shaped.
Hair is way off. Shading and shape.
Elbows are off.
The shirt is off.
The legs are way smaller than the torso.
The outlines are off.
The entire shape is also way off.
The arms aren't going into the pockets. Well they are, but you have to enlarge the pockets.
Legs are too straight.
Feet are oddly shaped.
Hair is way off. Shading and shape.
Elbows are off.
The shirt is off.
The legs are way smaller than the torso.
The outlines are off.
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Re: Kenzo Sprite
by Trainer Lucas Sat Dec 31, 2011 1:05 pm
Dear god....Lol. He said he had green eyes. Lemme finish Blackout's Sspec, and I'll fix it.
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Re: Kenzo Sprite
by TehKrazeh1 Sat Dec 31, 2011 1:08 pm
OH, also, the shading is off since it's meant to be JUS.
Honestly, I think you should stop with JUS until you're more experienced. You don't seem to understand the JUS style as well as KD. That's why you never see me coming in with detailed JUS stuff. I started out with custom spriting random styles that have never existed before. Maybe you should also do that.
Honestly, I think you should stop with JUS until you're more experienced. You don't seem to understand the JUS style as well as KD. That's why you never see me coming in with detailed JUS stuff. I started out with custom spriting random styles that have never existed before. Maybe you should also do that.
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Re: Kenzo Sprite
by Trainer Lucas Sat Dec 31, 2011 1:17 pm
Yeah, maybe. But, I'm going to keep trying with the lessons Kidd gave me. We kinda stopped 'cause he's busy with the Dev tests. Anyway, I'll fix it. Just gimme like 15 minutes.
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Re: Kenzo Sprite
by TehKrazeh1 Sat Dec 31, 2011 2:19 pm
Trainer Lucas wrote:Yeah, maybe. But, I'm going to keep trying with the lessons Kidd gave me. We kinda stopped 'cause he's busy with the Dev tests. Anyway, I'll fix it. Just gimme like 15 minutes.
KD's lessons are understandable, but either way, it's difficult to sprite JUS. He gave me his dev tests too, and I also decided to do the tests. Maybe you could do the tests. Just as practice, like what I'm doing.
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